Friday, 18 May 2012

Response 2: 40 years...


The day had finally arrived. I’d been waiting 40 years for this and I felt sick with excitement and nerves. What if she can’t forgive me or worst of all what if she doesn’t love me? I was only 16 and in those days it was forbidden to have a child before marriage. I had no choice, my father made me give my baby girl away! She agreed to meet me at the same place I last saw her. It just felt right. I’ll never forget it was a nice breezy day in Scarborough. As I stood waiting, that very same breeze swept through my hair. It took me back 40 years.
As I moved my hair away from my face I saw her stood in front of me. She was beautiful.
She didn’t have to say a word, the hug she gave me told me ... she loved me!

1 comment:

  1. The winner - exactly what I was looking for – a breezy day in Scarborough. A very uplifting ending to a story which could so easily have had a gloomy conclusion. As with previous weeks, it was a very difficult task to select a winner this week as all the submissions were very entertaining.

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