Friday, 22 June 2012

Response 1: Saturday night, Sunday morning.


As I came round to the noise of the ticking clock, I saw it was 4.00; I’m guessing morning.  The pain is starting to slip away now.

In a backless dress under cardboard sheets, my mind starts to wonder to how I got here.
I was dancing on the floor.
Girl of my dreams with me and that song that goes something like doo da da.
I can’t really remember, but as I look down to see my leg in plaster, I realise that impressive slick dance moves were more drunken granddad dancing after a bottle of whiskey.

I’m feeling lonely, feeling blue.  Girl of my dreams, I had ruined it. What a fool!
I could picture her now, we were so happy and now she’s gone.  If only I could speak to her again.
A knock on the door and a sweet voice said “I bought you a coffee?’...

1 comment:

  1. This is probably something that would happen to me on a night out so it made me laugh! love the ending, made me want to read more.

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